I'm afraid...
I'm afraid of a girls rejection and the public humiliation.
I'm afraid that no one cares, that people stare and falling down stairs.
I'm afraid of drowning, frowning and doubting.
I'm afraid...
I'm afraid of pets, debts, and making worthless sets.
I afraid of sharing, staring and being daring.
I'm afraid of flying, dying and everybody is lying to ME.
I'm afraid...
I'm afraid of creeps, beeps and the ocean deeps.
I'm afraid of love, the dove and also, the pub.
I'm afraid of failure and that I am Never good enough.
I'm afraid of everything.
I'm afraid...
I'm afraid of... I don't know what I'm afraid of.
I'm afraid of getting rolled, getting pulled and not getting dough.
I'm afraid of YOU....
But YOU will NEVER stop ME...
i like how well this flows! and i am totally all about closing lines! "but you will never stop me" so good! i love that you acknowledge your fears, but dont let them overcome you!
ReplyDeleteI'm afraid of flying, dying and everybody is lying to me. I love this line. I really like the style of your writing because you put it out there, what you are really feeling. It adds so much. Keep it up.
ReplyDeletei love your style, how you're just honest and upfront. and the rhymes are awesome, i think my favorite line is "i'm afraid of pets, debts, and making shitty sets."
ReplyDeleteThanks everyone. It means so much to me and makes me want to keep writing when I see all of the positive things you write.
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